Friday, December 4, 2009

Argument Topic

Wobbling off of the plane you stumble to the baggage claim trying to pop your ears. Your two suitcases bounce down the conveyer belt and you suddenly realize the lightness of your wallet from having to pay an extra $25 for purchasing your ticket on the phone, an added $50 for wanting extra leg room in a preferred seat, $20 for the extra suitcase you packed, another added luggage fee because both bags were over 50 pounds, and more money was expunged from paying for a snack, non-alcoholic beverage, meal, and blanket/pillow package. Now you wonder if flying is worth the cost since customer experience is no longer an issue for airline executives.

Airlines need to be more closely regulated, so patrons can be protected and have their interests protected when airline executives decide to add unnecessary fees and charges. Without close surveillance, companies can demand whatever prices and add policies that only benefit themselves without punishment. The Department of Transportation released a statement to USA TODAY “that it doesn’t have the authority to determine what an airline can charge for its services,” (Maynard 2).

Airlines have created an added fee to everything aspect of flying--purchasing a ticket, loading luggage, and perks that were once complimentary, snacks, meals, all beverages, etc. To avoid paying an added fee for a ticket, one would have to go to the counter; procuring a ticket by phone or internet can cost up to $25 extra (Source 5). Once a ticket is obtained, more money can be expected to vanish throughout the remainder of the voyage. Airlines also give no leeway on wanting to cancel a flight or change the time of the original flight--doing so can cost up to $150 (Stoller 7). Then, desiring to fly during popular occasions --Christmas, Thanksgiving, New Years, and spring break--can expect to pay an additional $10 to the ticket price (Maynard 3). Thankfully, the first bag checked for most flights is free, American, Hawaiian, Northwest, Spirit, and United will charge up to $25 for the first suitcase, but each additional piece of luggage will be charged up to $252 (Stoller 6). Packing a suitcase that exceeds 50 pounds will add at most another $125 to the total overall cost (Maynard 1). While on the actual flight, if a passenger still has money left in their wallet can expect to pay for every extra necessity that was once complimentary--non-alcoholic and alcoholic drinks, meals, snacks, pillows and blankets, etc. (“Ten Reasons” 6). Marc Belsher, a healthcare consultant is angered by the underhanded tactics of airlines, “Give me the price of the ticket, let me make an informed decision and don’t anger me by nickel-and-diming me on every bloody charge,” (Stoller 3). Democratic Representative James L. Oberstar pegged exactly what airlines are hoping to accomplish with the extra costs and high fees, “...a backdoor way to raise ticket prices,” (Maynard 2).

Executives justify their prices by teaching passengers how to pack and making up for the increase in jet fuel cost and believing that the passenger controls their own cost of travel from ordering extra amenities. “‘Instead of raising every fare in response to ever increasing fuel prices, our new luggage policy gives passengers the opportunity to control their cost of travel by packing lighter,’ says Barry Biffle, Spirit’s senior vice president, (Stoller 1). Art Van Bodegraven, a management consultant, agrees with the new luggage policy, “It’s high time [United began charging]...Overweight vacationers on bargain fares, sloppy packers, and poor planners have been riding free, baggage-wise, for too long,” (Stoller 2). Sometimes multiple luggage isn’t a case of not knowing how to pack or packing too much; passengers traveling long-term will naturally need to have more clothing depending on how long the trip is which makes extra luggage fees unreasonable and unacceptable. The new policies and rate changes are expected to accumulate $100 million annually and most of the cost savings will come from burning less fuel from having less baggage weight in the cargo hold (Stoller 2). Executives then blame the patron for added comforts claiming that they racked up their own bill. These fees are from “an a la carte restaurant menu, allowing passengers to choose what they want as part of their trip,” (Maynard 2). Of course this method works because if a flight is over a few hours people are naturally going to want food and drinks, not to mention international flights that can last numerous hours. In this respect, airlines have no excuse except cheating passengers by being dirty handed. “We have been aggressive and creative,” said John Tague, president of United Airlines.

What management fails to acknowledge is the decrease in airline travel. During the strongest quarter for travel, between July and September, the nine biggest airlines lost $236 million (Maynard 3). Revenue from business travelers, a main source of income, was down 25 percent in the third quarter after a total 40 percent from earlier in the year (Maynard 4). “Not only are the airlines pricing themselves out of existence, but they’re offending our sense of fairness in the process, thereby accelerating the alienation between their customers and themselves,” (“Ten Reasons” 7).

Although the airlines are blatantly robbing passengers with no remorse, some charges do contain credible reasoning. Increasing jet fuel prices and unnecessary packing choices provide defense for some charges. Numerous vacationers travel with suitcases filled with clothing and an extra bag to pack with souvenirs. Charging an extra fee for processing an empty suitcase is reasonable because space and effort are being used for a bag with nothing in it. Otherwise, fees for luggage should be eradicated because many passengers may need all of the items they pack. As for rising fuel costs, passengers would be more understanding of escalating prices if the money was towards fuel, but patrons know the difference between paying what is owed and being asked to overpay.

Airlines can charge whatever prices the executives desire with no punishment, robbing and alienating customers in the process. Taking advantage of circumstances such as having to pay for an onboard meal is despicable and how an interference hasn’t occurred is an outrage. Now I wonder: what other companies get away with cheating customers using deceptive ploys and outrageous charges with no interference?

Monday, November 23, 2009

Argument Topic

Standardizing the world. Why can't ordinary, everyday devices and aspects of life be the same from country to country? International travel is a hassle because of different currency, languages, vehicles, units (metric versus english), and even power outlets. I will be arguing that the globe should try to unite under similar concepts and with this communication and travel, etc. will be easier than it is now.

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Template C

  1. I plan on using a personal experience as a way to paint a picture and allow the reader to almost experience what it is like to attend class in room 206. Obviously the source of the information is me and it’s credible not only because I find myself to be a credible source, but because I experience the conditions of this room twice a week and I can compare room 206 to another stadium seating room in classroom building 1. Having me describe the room will hopefully enable the readers to determine what I’m reviewing.
  2. I haven’t written my thesis yet. The thesis will come together as my paper comes together.
  3. Criteria for my essay include quality of learning inside of the building, quality of surroundings and furnishings, how this building compares to others on campus, and safety of the building.

4. I imagine on possible rebuttal could be that for many people interiors of classrooms don’t compare to the lack of parking on campus, etc. I would counter argue that the best learning conditions should surpass everything else because education is the sole purpose of college and students should be provided with the best educational atmosphere possible (especially for the amount of money students pay to attend UCF).

Template B

Four important criteria concerning the evaluation of room 206 in the Math and Physics building include the quality of learning, quality of surroundings and furnishings, how this building compares to others on campus, and if the building is safe.


Quality of learning is possibly the most important criteria for this review because as a university the number one priority should be the the education students receive. If a university has the means of updating the conditions in which students learn they should. I as a student hate having to learn in bottom of the barrel conditions because the dreary, dilapidated conditions don’t encourage me to learn. Room 206 is dark and rundown and makes me tired and focus on other things rather than learning my professors lesson.


Quality of surroundings connects with the quality of learning and the reasons I mentioned above. It’s unsatisfactory that the upholstery on seats is worn and springs are sticking through the holes. When a classroom is falling down and wearing out I as the student don’t feel like a top priority. If I were, the classroom I go to learn in would be in better condition.

If all of the buildings at UCF were older and the school didn’t have the funds to repair the damage to the classrooms, the decrepit atmosphere would not be as big of a deal as it is, but seeing as UCF is a top notch school and I assume possesses sufficient funds, repairing a few classrooms should not be a major deal.


I often wonder how old the Math and Physics building is. I assume the building is fairly old based on the classrooms, but I wonder if the building structure itself is safe. I sat in a chair with a spring sticking out and maybe I was fortunate that the spring only cut my shirt instead of me.


Thursday, November 5, 2009

Plagiarism Workshop

1. 3.5 They have the potential to copy off of one another because they used the same articles and books. If they chose not to use the same resources it wouldn't be as serious.  

2. 0 You're not plagiarizing anyone. Both assignments are different and will need to be written differently. 

3. 3.5 You don't copy anyone's answer directly, but you're using their opinions and basically rewording them to make them more "authentic". 

4. 2.5 The format would be similar, but the information within the assignment is different therefore not plagiarism. It has the potential to be plagiarism.

Austin Thomas
Jade Freeman

Template A


Values: Seeing as I’m reviewing old vs. new buildings, my audience could be interested in education and concerned with the poor quality and deteriorating atmosphere of some buildings. 


Social Needs: Their friends could be interested in certain conditions as well. It’s odd for a top notch school to have such ancient interiors in a popular building, but have all new furnishings in another building. 


Cognitive Needs: Benefits could be that students may have an easier time learning in a new building because the seats are more comfortable and the lighting isn’t so dim. I myself find it depressing to be in an old, rundown building. 

Monday, November 2, 2009

Review Topic

For the review assignment I plan on comparing the auditorium seating in the Math and Physics Building room 206 compared to Classroom Building room 121 auditorium seating. In addition to the two rooms I spend a significant amount of time in, I also plan to compare the buildings as a whole--MAP is an old, dated building and the seats in 206 alone are are old and the fabric is torn with springs poking through the holes while everything in CL1 121 appears new. It's sad that in a building almost every student will have to visit is in disarray; especially at a top ranked school where reupholstering a few seats should be a low-key, easy task.